Postcard Feedback for Lauren J.
Aesthetic Notes
- I like the abstract design, and the consistent theme between each!
- Interesting color choice - what's the association between purple / warm purple with Joy and/or war
- The thin strokes of white text can be a little hard to see on the darker background
Structure Notes
- The quote is the focus with each design, which the designs help to support
- In the first two, the design (not the quote) stands out a lot more
- For mobile layouts, the text is pretty broken up because the width of the screen is cut off a little by the design, which can interrupt reading flow
Technical Notes
- Seems like sizing between desktop/mobile will work, just make sure the text/design never overlap
- Might be good to have designs span the entire page since they'll look a little weird if cut off